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No, really, I can’t help it

Let’s look at this closely.

The Night Abraham Called to the Stars

Do you remember the night Abraham first saw
The stars? He cried to Saturn: “You are my Lord!”
How happy he was! When he saw the Dawn Star,

He cried, “”You are my Lord!” How destroyed he was
When he watched them set. Friends, he is like us:
We take as our Lord the stars that go down.

When Abraham first saw the stars, he cried to Saturn: “You are my Lord!” Prior to this Abraham had lived  inside a cave in Northern Chaldea and had no acquaintance with stars whatsoever. This is further illustrated by his confusion when, amazed with the stars, he cries out to Saturn and then to Venus (the morning star) which, though kinda visible to the naked eye, aren’t exactly stars but something else altogether (planets).

But of course Bly is not just throwing the planets on us at random. Saturn, as we know, symbolizes severity (it is the root of the adjective “saturnine”) and patriarchy, and Abraham is a patriarch - whose progeny, it’s prophesied in Genesis, will be as numerous as the stars in heaven. Then the stars set, progeny and patriarch, and we see the morning star, which in Latin is Lucifer - expelled from the firmament, always closely following the sun (Venus is never more than, I don’t remember, 40 degrees? 35 degrees? away from the sun in the sky), the light-bringer. Besides being Lucifer, the morning star is also Venus, a planet that symbolizes love and all that comes along with it (it is the root of the adjective “venereal”).  So Abraham the biblical patriarch first cries out to severe wise Saturn, surrounded by its numerous progeny, but then they leave him and he becomes a worshipper of the morning star (Lucifer-Venus) instead. Thought provoking, but then that leaves him as well. Bummer.

Friends, he is like us: / We take as our Lord the stars that go down.” In case anybody missed it, we are not really talking about the life of the Biblical Abraham here. This is metaphor. Also, recall that Abraham is the man of the perfect faith, willing to sacrifice his own son if his zany god asks him to.

Notice the enjambent, how it shakes around what would ordinarily be a pretty ordinary verse: “Do you remember the night Abraham first saw / The stars?” Damn good device.

We are faithful companions to the unfaithful stars.
We are diggers, like badgers; we love to feel
The dirt flying out from behind our back claws.

And no one can convince us that mud is not
Beautiful. It is our badger soul that thinks so.
We are ready to spend the rest of our life

Bly reiterates: “We are faithful companions to the unfaithful stars.” Please note it down. It will be on the test.

In the first two stanzas, Bly used the stars as an allegory to the cold, unreachable ideals man is drawn to. In the next two stanzas, Bly surprises us by contrasting this image of ideal-sky with the image of mud, representing the seduction of materiality. The transition is stunning - it comes in the middle of stanza 3, out of the blue, with no warnings that we are changing subjects completely.

According to Bly, we love the stars, but we love the ground, too. You know who also loves the ground? Badgers. They love the ground so much they dig holes to live inside it. And so does man. We have the soul of a badger. We turn our backs to the stars and live in deep dark holes in Northern Chaldea.

Notice again the clever enjambment and how it turns an otherwise straightforward verse into one of sophisticated rhythm: “And no one can convince us that mud is not / Beautiful.” Bly almost makes it look easy.

Walking with muddy shoes in the wet fields.
We resemble exiles in the kingdom of the serpent.
We stand in the onion fields looking up at the night.

We are going esoteric here, with much puzzling symbolism. Is “the kingdom of the serpent” Egypt, where part of Abraham’s numerous progeny will end up as exiles? Until the first verse, we were badgers loving the ground and were quite ready to spend the rest of our life about it. Verse number 2 lets us know that no, really, we aren’t, we are like Hebrews exiled in Egypt yearning for the Promised Land. Again, no transition. Stunning.

We stand in the onion fields - beautiful imagery, onion fields - looking up at the stars again.

My heart is a calm potato by day, and a weeping
Abandoned woman by night. Friend, tell me what to do,
Since I am a man in love with the setting stars.

My heart is a calm potato by day.” The heart of Robert Bly is like a potato - one of the calm ones -, comfortably half-buried in the ground, peaceful and serene like only a potato, when it is calm, can be. But that is during the day. Then night comes with its stars, and this unsettles the calm potato. It is no longer a calm potato, it is quite upset. It turns into a woman, a weeping woman abandoned by the stars. Stars that she (= the heart of Robert Bly) is in love with. Also: in stanza number 2, Bly addressed us as “friends” - he is speaking to the crowds, the lecturer to its audience. Now he has gone more intimate and talks to us individually, confessing: friend. Or maybe everybody else has already gone away.

Bly is Poet Laureate of the state of Minnesota, and, in 1968, received the National Book Award.

Philosophy of the Silver Box, by Giselle Beiguelman and yours truly (hi!), is in Vivo Arte.Mov São Paulo from yesterday to mid-november. This work was comissioned by the Bienal de Arte Contemporáneo de Sevilla, where it will also be on display* from October 2nd to January.

* It’s the XXI century. Art replicates.

It’s that self-same impulse that has him rearrange / both ‘The Times They Are A-Changin” and ‘Things Have Changed’

When Paul Muldoon (my favourite living poet*) became poetry editor for the New Yorker, I spouted elsewhere, “maybe now the poems of said magazine will get any better.” Muldoon, afterall, poked fun at the “New Yorker poem” (defined by David Orr as “basically an epiphany-centered lyric heavy on words like ‘water’ and ‘light’“) in his hilarious Capercallies, in Madoc.

Muldoon is also a rock’n'roller. He gathered with fellow colleagues at Princeton (where he teaches Creative Writing) and formed Rackett, a “3-car garage band”, writing lyrics with his characteristic outrageous rhymes. (Also, is there any song half as clever as “My ride is here“, that he wrote for Warren Zevon?)

Well, anyway, Bob Dylan poems in the latest issue of the New Yorker. Enjoy.

* Maybe. I have Charles Wright days also.

Der Fall Wallace

(I couldn’t help myself)
I read some Baudrillard when I was in my teens. It was the late 90s, all the cool kids were reading him, and I am, as you know, a fashion victim. I have by now erased most of his vague, unsubtle theorizing from my memory, but some lines, some insights have stayed with me. One of them reads:

We used to live in the internal imaginary world of the mirror, of the divided self and of the stage, of otherness and internal alienation. Today we live in the imaginary world of the screen, of the internal interface and the reduplication of contiguity and internal networks. All our machines are screens. We too have become screens, and the interactivity of men has become the interactivity of screens.

The imaginary world of the mirror: the insurmountable gap between the true self and its representations, interior or exterior. The face always hidden behind the stage mask; or, as the doctor tells the actress in Persona:

I understand, all right. The hopeless dream of being - not seeming, but being. At every waking moment, alert. The gulf between what you are with others and what you are alone. The vertigo and the constant hunger to be exposed, to be seen through, perhaps even wiped out. Every inflection and every gesture a lie, every smile a grimace. Suicide? No, too vulgar. But you can refuse to move, refuse to talk, so that you don’t have to lie. You can shut yourself in. Then you needn’t play any parts or make wrong gestures. Or so you thought. But reality is diabolical. Your hiding place isn’t watertight. Life trickles in from the outside, and you’re forced to react. No one asks if it is true or false, if you’re genuine or just a sham. Such things matter only in the theatre, and hardly there either. I understand why you don’t speak, why you don’t move, why you’ve created a part for yourself out of apathy. I understand. I admire. You should go on with this part until it is played out, until it loses interest for you. Then you can leave it, just as you’ve left your other parts one by one.

Even the actress’s desperate gesture, shutting in so as not to be unfaithful to her true self, fails: life forces you to react, and this shutting in is itself a role she chooses to play.

We are, Baudrillard argues, beyond that, however. Theory has made us wary of such “true faces,” immanent and preceding any enactment, beyond the grasp of language. This suspicion eventually became widespread, or at least so it seems looking from here. We have not, however, become contented egoless Buddhist screens, or learned to live with the thought that “such things matter only in the theatre, and hardly there either.” And this is where I depart from Baudrillard, in claiming that the world of the screen is still a world of otherness and internal alienation. The content of the screen is even more artificial and derivative than that of the mirror and the stage persona; the key difference is that the former does not, like the latter two, establish an overt tension between the authentic and the artificial, the source and the derivation. A source is still assumed, but it’s not next to the mirror or behind the mask: the source of the image on the screen is remote, perhaps impossible to reach or to trace. When one identifies with the screen and the logic of the screen, knowledge of the true self is precluded from the start. It is there somewhere, but if your quest is to find it, you are screwed.


Wallace’s characters are all, in his own words, emotionally retarded. They are often very intelligent people, clever enough to learn the norms and expectations of the world around them, develop a keen sense of appropriateness, figure out what they have to say or do to get the desired response. What they haven’t done is attributing meaning to any of this; creating an identity for themselves; to thine own self being true. They are hollow men, dettached from themselves. They have never taken even the first step in that most German of journeys, that of character formation.

But matters are even worse: in Wallace’s world, this step is unthinkable. His characters are all suffering, but of a diffuse pain they cannot articulate (even when it’s obvious to the reader where it’s coming from); they aren’t mature enough even to acknowledge it, until it comes to overwhelm them completely - a situation Wallace mistakenly labels “Psychotic Depression”. Their first route of escape is dealing with pain beneath language and articulation, by falling into addiction - usually to chemicals or alcohol, but Wallace neatly catalogues the wide range of possibilities.

Not that his characters never set a search for sincerity and authenticity, like in Good Old Neon and The Depressed Person. The former shows a character finding that every gesture of his is a lie, and, unable to find anything authentic, finally kills himself (Wallace by the end explains that the story consists of projections of the author - by which he is very unambiguous about being himself, not some fictional author - upon reading about a similar suicide on the news). Good Old Neon searchs outward; The Depressed Person moves inwards, in a spiral of self-denouncement of artifice that never really comes anywhere closer to the sincerity it seeks, but replicates the same artifice endlessly.

The other choice - a better one, one that might actually work - is the approach of the Alcoholics Anonymous. When Wallace’s characters finally get a glimpse inwards, what they see is allegorized by deformed children; something helpless and revolting, both undeveloped and malformed. Wallace’s AA is a strategy of infantilization, of coming to terms with oneself by reducing oneself to one’s lowest, most primitive mode of function: of abandoning pride and becoming this deformed child they ultimately recognize is their present state. The alternative to indulging in vice, in Wallace’s world, is radical self-indulgence.

Wallace is often contrasted to writers such as Paliahnuk, for the former’s advantage. It is true, of course, that Wallace is a much more skillful writer; but when we contrast the works beyond form, we see that Fight Club starts where Infinite Jest leaves us: Tyler Durden, the protagonist of Fight Club, is also a very successful emotional retard, suffering from extreme discontentment he can’t even begin to articulate. He is more advanced than Wallace’s typical character (let’s take Hal here) in that at least he is aware of how his identity has become loose, indistinct and fragmentary. In the beginning of the story, Tyler tries the support groups Wallace so unabashedly eulogizes; eventually he finds, however, that such groups are even a greater travesty than everything else he tried, and a self-degrading one at that. True, the alternative he finds - an aggressive revolt against the world, directed as diffusely as his sense of discontentment - is not the most well-rounded of attitudes. But there is more hope in the world of Fight Club than in that of Infinite Jest, for in the world of Fight Club, however misguided the results of this might be, the notion of human dignity still lives. There is also a bit more self-knowledge there, but one that is crucial.


In a letter to Schiller, Goethe comments how Wilhelm Meister is actually no Meister at all, and calls him Wilhelm Schuler. He notices however that as he wanted to write about character and how it comes to form, he could not make his protagonist mature, with a strong character. These things are more evident in the deficient examples, Goethe argues. (Not Goethe’s words, I don’t have the book here to cite them.) We could try to make sense of Wallace’s works in those terms. We would say he speaks exclusively of the most wretched, despicable men - hideous men - because it is there that such troubles are more evident.

It is wrong to speculate on the private thoughts of a writer by his books, and very disrepectful when he has just killed himself. But Wallace’s narrators, his narrative voices, never seem to look at this dispairing world exactly from above; they alternate perspective and participation. His defense of the infantilizing AA - something which, on the terms he describes it, cannot possibly be a satisfactory solution to anyone - is too excited not to sound sincere, even if the story itself casts its doubts. His characters often speak of “self-consciousness,” a sensation that is actually one of the clearest symptoms of self-oblivion and absence of character, the anxiety when the screen is accused of being a screen but there is nothing other than the screen, and one would like to continue living in the travesty of the screen rather than ever probing this revealed abyss. Fair enough; but they speak of it full of vanity, a defense mechanism that tries to turn an horrendous deficiency into some sort of advantage (it’s better to suffer from self-consciousness than not being self-conscious at all, right? We are suffering from the burden of qualities here.); and Wallace seems all too often to validate this vanity, even though the stories themselves always end up making it clear that what they call “self-consciousness” would be properly called “self-oblivion”. The internal alienation Baudrillard supposed we had left behind in the world of the mirror.


This post might come off as lofty, pointing to the failure in Wallace’s work even to articulate the problem of character, the telling impossibility of growing up in the worlds he described, the naivety and, let’s face it, dishonesty that are pervasive in all his books - as though I had myself an answer to all this, knew how to chase away the ghosts that haunt all his characters. But truth is I don’t. I think the abysses are all actually there.

It is terrible that we lost him. I spoke disparagingly of him, and of how he seemed to be getting worse rather than better over time; of how his grip on the Zeitgeist seemed to have become loose, how IJ already read like a book of the past, and the recent short stories were still back there. But I was looking forward to his next novel. He was one of our most inventive writers, a master whose tours de force were downright humiliating; there are very few writers working today that I enjoy more than Wallace.

Also, I struggled over Infinite Jest during difficult times, and his books strung chords I was not hearing quite anywhere else. Becoming a fan of Wallace was important to me, and the process of growing over it was the obvious continuation. Through his works, he played the part of a friend, of sorts. And it is sad to see a friend go.

wallace is dead

I think I ought to say something about this. I had a love-hate relationship with Foster Wallace: I was amazed at first, but slowly came to dislike him for the, ehm, diseased Weltanschauung behind his brilliant technique. It bothered me, also, that I had never met a Foster Wallace fan who was in it for his brilliant skill, but always because of the parts that made me so strongly dislike him at times. I can’t say, however, that I ever truly dimissed his works, or that I could ever dismiss them and everything they came to stand for to me over time. Making an extraodinarily out or proportion comparison, I had a “Der Fall Wagner” thing with his works. When I get the time to digest the news, I guess some larger post should follow.

poke it with a stick. i dare you.

We all have a favourite bad poem, something so cringe-inducing, excruciatingly bad you get a thrill off like a 10-year-old might get off a gory movie. A poem you revisit every six months or so, to find with delight that it’s even worse than you recalled.

Well, at least I do. It’s called “The Night Abraham Called to the Stars”, by Pulitzer prize winner Robert Bly, and it is supposed to be a Ghazal, though not a very strict one - actually, it bears no resemblance to the Ghazal form whatsoever, which consists of rhyming couplets and refrains, but I guess Bly needed the ethnic bonus points. Bly entertains us with corny, obvious imagery which he then proceeds to cornily explain, and then finishes the poem with the most absurdly awkward imagery I have ever seen. All the while making very gratuitous use of enjambment, in actual rhythm stead - repeatedly.

Here it goes. Enjoy:

The Night Abraham Called to the Stars

Do you remember the night Abraham first saw
The stars? He cried to Saturn: “You are my Lord!”
How happy he was! When he saw the Dawn Star,

He cried, “”You are my Lord!” How destroyed he was
When he watched them set. Friends, he is like us:
We take as our Lord the stars that go down.

We are faithful companions to the unfaithful stars.
We are diggers, like badgers; we love to feel
The dirt flying out from behind our back claws.

And no one can convince us that mud is not
Beautiful. It is our badger soul that thinks so.
We are ready to spend the rest of our life

Walking with muddy shoes in the wet fields.
We resemble exiles in the kingdom of the serpent.
We stand in the onion fields looking up at the night.

My heart is a calm potato by day, and a weeping
Abandoned woman by night. Friend, tell me what to do,
Since I am a man in love with the setting stars.

Also: notice how he can’t make up his mind about how many people he is addressing - “friends” in s2, “Friend” in s6. I like to imagine there was a crowd at first, but by the end of the poem there was only one man standing in the audience, loving this as much as I do.

stuff to read

Electronic Literature in Europe conference in Bergen starts today, and most papers are available online.

Of note: Serge Bouchardon addressing one of my current obsessions (The Aesthetics of Materiality); Katarina Peović Vuković will talk about hypertext, cybertext, networked text, and their political function; Alice Ferrebe will talk of Japan and Electronic Literature; and Maria Engeberg looks for an Aesthetics of Noise, another obsession here, though her focus is on the literary.

art is boring let’s talk about football

Barbados needed to win the game by two clear goals in order to progress to the next round. Now the trouble was caused by a daft rule in the competition which stated that in the event of a game going to penalty kicks, the winner of the penalty kicks would be awarded a 2-0 victory.

With 5 minutes to go, Barbados were leading 2-1, and going out of the tournament (because they needed to win by 2 clear goals). Then, when they realized they were probably not going to score against Grenada’s massed defence, they turned round, and deliberately scored on their own goal to level the scores and take the game into penalties. Grenada, themselves not being stupid, realized what was going on, and then attempted to score an own goal themselves. However, the Barbados players started defending their opponents goal to prevent this.

In the last five minutes, spectators were treated to the incredible sight of both team’s defending their opponents goal against attackers desperately trying to score an own goal and goalkeepers trying to throw the ball into their own net. The game went to penalties, which Barbados won and so were awarded a 2-0 victory and progressed to the next round.

It’s from Snopes, there’s a “true” tag and even a small video, and I can’t stop laughing.

what this guy said

I read the latest posts at The Teeming Void and nod in agreement. Get this stuff published somewhere I can cite it. (&)